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Ok background on Joad is he's actually pretty cool, he just like pissing people off,  kind of like a class clown that doesn't ever stop pushing people's buttons.
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It was a bit overdramatic.

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And I was like wow you jerk, way to be an ****.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2013, 08:42:39 am »
Great chapter!
Hello! I am me, me is cool!

Just a funny joke!
I was standing in the park wondering why frisbees got bigger as they get closer. Then it hit me.

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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2013, 07:14:37 pm »
She sat on the rock and opened her back and reached for the nearest thing. She pulled out her potions textbook. She forgot she packed her school textbooks in there too,but it was a lucky thing she did. She looked inside the bag and looked for what she wanted. The letter. Dobby? Who in the world knew anything about this house elf named-Dobby?

"I do,"said somebody.

She turned and was facing a wrinkled big eyed pointy nosed figure,with nastiness in his voice and disgust in his face. She was facing what looked like a house elf from what she read in the care of magical creatures textbook.

 "Who are you?"asked Rachel.

"Kreacher,"said Kreacher. "Who are yoouu?" said Kreacher in reply.

 "I'm Rachel Rivera Snape,house of Slytherin,"said Rachel calmly.

 His eyes popped bigger when she mentioned the word "Slytherin".

"Kreacher's masters were all Slytherins, the whole row. Except for Sirius Black who was the filthy blood traitor he is and of course Harry Potter,"said Kreacher with a little more affection toward Rachel.

Her mind started racing unbelievably fast. Did he say Harry Potter?

"Now, Kreacher remains a lonely house elf with no master,"said Kreacher looking sadly but eyeing Rachel expectantly.

"Alright I will take you in,"said Rachel urging herself to be calm. Kreacher's face turned jolly as he stared at Rachel. "So who is Dobby?" said Rachel.

"Dobby is a house elf. Got freed by Harry Potter. A favorite of Harry Potter. Worked in the kitchens.Saved Harry Potter's life.  Died saving Harry Potter. Was a very good friend to Kreacher. Kreacher doesn't know why you want to know. Nobody speaks of the battle or the heroes ever,"said Kreacher as he neatly sorted out the junk from Rachel's bag.

"I have a little mission for you Kreacher. Can you track who wrote this letter?"rachel asked carefully covering up some parts that would have been confusing to him.

The GirlThe sohnd of a mission delighted Kreacher. He nodded vigorantly and that snotty look on his face was oddly happy. He sniffed the parchment carefully and reached out his hand. Rachel slowly took it. He snapped and their bodies were twisting. Rachel felt nauseous and once they hit land she was pushes down hard into the ground. She look around. Kreacher looking pleased with himself carried his sagging face and slouched with Rachel as they walked toward a little house. It had been smartly defended by curses and enchantments. It was a small ordinary house that could combine well with other muggle houses. The house was decorated in front with many animal statues. She was obviously in love with animals. They disgusted Kreacher which made Rachel laugh shortly. Wait, did she actually laugh? The first time in years, she heard a shaky sound of laughter.

"It looks okay,"said Rachel quietly.

Kreacher looked at the house, what was he used to?Dungeons? Kreacher stepped into the house quite normally as his filthy rag jumped up and down as he ran as quickly as he could from the statues. Rachel slowly stepped from the gate and was threw back with an enormous force.

"What the fu**,"said Rachel as she painfully got up.

How did Kreacher do it? Well, the house was obviously protected in every corner and she wasn't going to go try every corner. She drew out her wand and said "Alohomoras!"the second time. The gate was open and she stepped again. She got shocked and hit her head hard on the ground.

"Merlin's beard, who did these enchantments,"said Rachel as she was struggling to get back on her feet. She threw out her book of spells and said,"There has to be something!"she said frantically.

She heard the creak of the door and waited expectantly. Out came a frightened innocent looking girl. She drew out her wand by looking at Rachel,but Rachel was quicker  and she pointed her wand,"Expelliarmus!"she said defiantly. And the wand sort of magnetized toward Rachel. She examined the wand. It was a cedar wood with a small unicorn hair. The girl stammered and Rachel couldn't quite understand what she wanted to say.

"I-Wh-eh-um-ss,"said the defensless girl.

Behind her, a small create nervously came forward. She looked like Kreacher. Another House Elf. She wore a small blue dres and quite adorable,but Rachel didn't come here for another stupid house elf.

"Tell me, who are?"she said raising the wand.

"I wont-no please-no!"said the girl as Rachel was pointing both the wands at the girl.

Rachel dropped both the wands and they were eyeing each other then the wands. Rachel cleared her voice,anyway she didn't come here to socialize.

"Do you know who dobby is?"said Rachel looking at her eyes.
The girl cleared her voice and spoke clearly for the first time,but she could tell that there were tears pulling back from her throat. Instead,she just nodded. "Have you heard from him?"she asked. The girl shook her head and looked at Rachel for a few moments.

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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2013, 02:57:55 am »
Really good!
Hello! I am me, me is cool!

Just a funny joke!
I was standing in the park wondering why frisbees got bigger as they get closer. Then it hit me.

Sweet voldemort, d-d-dobby
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2013, 10:29:40 pm »
She stopped walking from the castle when she found herself in the middle of a big field. She was standing on the place where the big battle happened, on the stains brave wizards and witches shed in sacrifice. You-Know-Who was gone and everyone rejoiced,even the stupid dependent muggles could feel the presence. But when the time came, and the famous Harry Potter also disappears alongside,things began to change. Everyone didn't feel safe anymore, and began to question the defeat of You-Know-You. "Voldemort,"said the girl. the little village began to shake a bit. She took out her wand and pointed at the Castle. She flew toward the Castle and walked toward the door with chains strapped around it. "The headmaster's office,"whispered the girl.  She didn't know much magic,but she found herself pointing the wand at the door very conentratedly and said"Alohamora!" The chains loosely fell off and she cautiously approached the wooden door. She turned the old and rusty knob and walked in. The office was filled with cobwebs and the tile was very loose and creaky. She looked at the front wall  filled with faces she couldn't recognise but on the very top stood two portraits that obviously stood out. One of them was covered in a red frame with thick corners carved to make a lion. The portrait held a face that she could remember. He had an oval shaped friendly looking face with at least a foot long beard. He had piercing blue eyes with half moon spectacles over them. He wore blue robes and a slightly tilted blue cap. He was smiling kindly and bowing. "Dumbledore,"she said. Below the portrait were several belongings and descriptions of Albus Dumbledore. There was a newspaper about his death that she slipped into her black bag. On top was a full descriptions of his awards and his achievements which she also took a bit of interest in,but what interested her the most were the two pieces of parchments at the very bottom that looked like a will/testimony and a half opened letter.She took an old parchment that had been placed under the will and read it:
Dear Professor.Dumbledore,

I'd like to know when term starts again. I have been looking for you in the evenings and i heard from students you left to do some convincing in the ministry and from teachers that you naturally went to get a butterbeer. I simply took a 2 year break taking the Witch's Intermediate Testing of Careering in Hogwarts(Witch). I would have taken 3 years off but I heard the devastating news of You-Know-Who returning and it is quite public your the only one he fears. With you and Harry being in the school, I think We'd be quite safe. At least with you in the school, there are rumours of Harry being "The Chosen One." If he is, then You-Know-Who would probably march straight into the castle and take him. Just thinking logically professor, didn't mean to offend you if I did. I have taken my classes in order to become a Ministry worker in charge of Education. I did register for the advanced group as you suggested. Looking for you next year! I have been fetching the news form a really nice house elf named Dobby who i heard works in the kitchen castle.

W hi t l  o v ol e

a  g  ee   l


The writing faded and the ink got smeared as it was getting deeper.She rolled up the parchment and gasped. Someone knew something about how it happened.  The problem was...it wasn't quite clear when the writing got messy.  Dobby? Where could she find him?She took the will/testimony and put it over the dim light so she could at least make out some of the words. It simply said everything of his possesion belongs to Hogwarts except for 4 things. A deluminator for a dweeb called Ron Weasly who she remembered as the jealous good-for-nothing idiot who lurks by Harry Potter for attention. The second one was a book for a smart and humble girl called Hermione Granger who was easily known as the brightest witch ever known. The third was for Mr.Harry Potter a snitch for his skill and irreverence. It was known that Harry Potter was the youngest and the best seeker to play in a match since he studied in this school. The fourth one also belonged to Harry, the sword of gryffindor. A snitch,deluminatorm and a book? Those were the important things to give to the two most incredible witches and wizards and a cool deluminator for an idiot? There was the sword of course. It was meant for something. All of these things have to be important. Dumbledore wasn't that dumb. Then a thought began to ring in her mind. Could all these objects be related to the defeat of Voldemort? She was the only witch or wizard left to say the name without fear. And She moved over to the next portrait. It was covered in a green frame with snakes on the corners and writing she could surprisingly recognize. The man had a sunken face with long wavy hair to the shoulders. He had no beard but had the evil,but protective and appreciative look on his face. His eyes were a shade of red and brown mixed together and he was clothed in black robes. He wasn't smiling or bowing,but he had a look of passion behind that face that made him hard to understand. A burst of lava blew from her stomach.

"Severus Snape,"she said.

 Her uncle, the true hero. She had a feeling of revenge, a feeling of honor and pride looking at his face. She hadn't really noticed it,but a strip of salty liquid dropped from her eyes as she began to stare at his picture. Her teeth clenched and she looked away for the tear to go away and then moved her long black hair back. She looked below the portrait. There was nothing there except a piece of ripped parchment with thick ink saying: never fear the endShe took all these things into her bag and stared at her wand. It was a 12'' Dragon core wand with a pheonix hair that stuck up at the end. That's what made her wand so special. It was a combination nobody dreamed of ever seeing. It wasn't any Pheonix though. It was the last feather of the last pheonix to survive. Not any pheonix, but the pheonix of Albud Dumbledore himself. Pheonix hairs were usually meant for gryffindors as the wand crafter believed. Dragon core was obviously the wand for Sltheryins. She walked back into the Great Hall,which was not so great anymore. She began to turn the knob of the exit when she got stopped by a voice. "Rachel, tell me exactly where you think your going?"said her headmaster. She turned and said,"Out." Her headmaster froze at the response and her lip turned into a nasty curl. Rachel pushed the creaky door open and shut it clear behind her. Her heart thumped. Was she really going to put her life on risk? The answer was:yes.

"Why?"said a voice in her head. "For the truth," replied Rachel.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 09:23:47 pm »
Is this like the wizard apocalypse :P its great.  How can you write so long? Don't u get tired of typing...
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 07:51:05 pm »
LOL Thanks! :D I'm trying to make it sorta related to the forum.
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Re: Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 03:12:38 pm »
Amazing! XD :o
Hello! I am me, me is cool!

Just a funny joke!
I was standing in the park wondering why frisbees got bigger as they get closer. Then it hit me.

Sweet voldemort, d-d-dobby
Oh duumble-dore!
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Reborn-A Fanfiction
« Reply #1 on: August 16, 2013, 08:49:46 pm »
The half confused-half nerving girl with the black hair walked up to the chair below a ragged looking hat that was expecting to see her,as her headmaster shouted her name. She walked slowly and reluctantly sat on the filthy leather chair as the headmaster put the hat on her head. She had deep black eyes with a lining of blue. The worn out Sorting hat began to sing:

Many a year ago it seems,
The duty fell to me,
To sing my song and bring the news,
Of where students ought to be.
Chosen by the founders four,
To help young students find their way,
When, confused, they stumble in,
On their first Hogwarts day.
Four houses to choose from,
Not one less or more,
Each one by a different founder,
To fill with students they adore.
Gryffindor, loving bravery,
Chose the strong of heart,
While Slytherin, feeling differently,
Thought cunning the greatest art.
Ravenclaw claimed for her own house,
The brainy and the smart,
While Hufflepuff took to her dear house,
The just and kind of heart.
All these students, with their differences,
Are each key to this great school.
And if Hogwarts hopes to stand,
Unity’s the greatest tool.
House to house and hand to hand,
Leaving differences behind.
Only when you work together,
Can your strengths all be combined.
Now at last, the time has come,
For me to send you separate ways.
But remember, our division,
Could bring the end of Hogwarts’ days.

There was no applause,just a blank room as the headmaster patiently waited for the sorting results.

"Hmm, this one is different. Like her Uncle Snape. Brave,smart,loyal,and clever. But Very strong and I see many things ahead of you. You can choose the house you want little girl,"said the hat wearily. There she sat outraged,"I pick Slytherin,house of Salazar Slytherin." She wandereed around. The corridors were empty,the classrooms. Nothing was there left to see. "Has everything truly changed sinced Voldemort perished,and of course harry potter died?"she thought. No,she wouldn't let this happen,Harry Potter isn't gone, and Hogwarts will never be. She has to be the one, she has to recreate Hogwarts,she has to recreate the wizarding world. They won't be weak and scared that harry has gone,A stronger hope has been reborn. Hogwarts will have Harry Potter Forever......







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